初中英文：Thank you mum_800字

Thereisapersonshesilentlypaynoreturn，thanpersonisthemother。thelifeofme、raisingme、bringmeup、givemeahome，Letmebefreefromcare。Butlalwaysdonotunderstand，thinkthisisasunalterableprinciples，butlwaswrong。Iwanttosaytoher：lloveyou，Cansaynottoexport。Whenlneedhelp，Ialwaysthinkofherfirst，andshewilldoherbesttohelpme。Whenlamhappy，shewillbemorehappythanme，whenlamsad，shewillaccompanyme。Isincerelysaytoyou，thankyou。

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Mymotherisapersonwhosilentlypaysnoreturntotakecareofme.Shegavemelifeandahome.Shetriesherbesttoraisemeupandalwaysputmeatthefirstplace.ButsometimesIcan'tunderstandher.IthinkIcandolotsofthingsbymyself.EvenIsaidsomethingnotgoodtoher.Ideeplyregret.IwanttotellherthatIloveher.WhenIneedhelp,shewillbethereanddoherbesttohelpme.WhenIamhappy,shewillbehappierthanme.WhenIamsad,shewillaccompanyme.Iwanttosay,"Mum,thankyouandIloveyou!"

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