小学英文：THE GREEN PARROT FINDS A HOME_2000字

Afterashorttime,agreenparrothoppedoutoftheenchantedzoo,andbacktowardsthetown.Ashewashoppingabout,theanimalcontrolcameandshoutedtothegreenparrot;theparrotunderstood,andstartedtoflyup.Thevanofthesocalled,“Animalcontroller”,followeduntilthegasranout.Hehadnochoicebuttogiveup.

Nowofcourse,thegreenparrotescapedoutofsight,andfoundsometwigsthatweregoingtohelphimbecomfortableduringthewholetimefreedom.WhenthepirateCaptainCookcamebackfromhisjourney;hestoppedawhiletofindtreasureonanislandduringhiswaypass.Onceortwiceatimehewouldturnbackandsailforland,andsohecouldn’tmakeuphischoice.Atlasthegotthetreasurefromhismates,andstartedforlandimmediately,theykeptthetreasureinabox,whichhadacodeofhandsomeShip.Noneofhismatesknewthat,sothatwhenevertheywantedtostealsomegoldfromtheCaptain,theywouldhavetoenterthecode.

Nowlet’sgobacktotheparrot;theparrotwasactuallyhavingaprettygoodtime,buthisnestbecameaprettykettleoffish.Hiseyesightwasnottoobadeither;norhisears,excepttheywereassmallasanant.WhenCaptain.Cook’sshipcameclosertolandtheparrotwasallearstohearwhathewassaying.“Mates,yougodownandfetchasmanygoldasyoucan,whileIstayhere,Ihadalongweekofsailingthisship;andsoI’mgoingtostayinmybedandkickback.”

Hismateswerelikeservantsandobeyedimmediately,theparrothowever;heardhiseveryword,andwantedtostaywiththecaptainandlive.Hehadaplan,andthenheflewdownandtickledamate’stoe.Thematelaughed,andtheparrotstopped.Whenthematepaidattentiontotheparrot,thematesaid,“Howareyoudoing?”theparrotanswered,“Great;howareyoudoing?”“Nottoobad,thanks;”“Takeiteasy,”theysoonbecamefriends,andchattedallalong,“So,canyougivemeahometoliveontheship?”“Surething,pieceofcake;”whentheygottheparrotontheship;thecaptaincameout,andbecamefriendwiththeparrotalso.

Theparrotgavehimadvice,andhebecamewealthyandreturnedallthegold,butkeptthetreasurehefoundhimselfonotherislands;andwhenpeopletroubletheparrot,thecaptainwithwhichwilldefeatthoseguyswithhismightysword.

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Afterashorttime,agreenparrothoppedoutoftheenchantedzoo,andwentbacktowardsthetown.Ashewashoppingabout,theanimalcontrolofficercameandshoutedtohim;theparrotunderstood,andstartedtoflyup.Thevanofthesocalled“Animalcontroller”,followeduntilthegasranout.Hehadnochoicebuttogiveup.

Nowofcourse,thegreenparrotescapedoutofsight,andfoundsometwigsthatweregoingtohelphimbecomfortableduringthewholefreetime.WhenthepirateCaptainCookcamebackfromhisjourney;hestoppedawhiletofindtreasureonanislandduringhiswaypass.Onceortwiceatimehewouldturnbackandsailforland,buthecouldn’tmakeuphismind.Atlasthegotthetreasurefromhismates,andstartedforlandimmediately,theykeptthetreasureinabox,whichhadacodeofhandsomeShip.Noneofhismatesknewthat,sowhenevertheywantedtostealsomegoldfromtheCaptain,theywouldhavetoenterthecode.

Nowlet’sgobacktotheparrot;theparrotwasactuallyhavingaprettygoodtime,buthisnestbecameaprettykettleoffish.Hiseyesightwasnottoobadeither;norhisears.WhenCaptainCook’sshipcameclosertoland,theparrotwasallearstohearwhathewassaying.“Mates,yougodownandfetchasmuchgoldasyoucan,whileIstayhere.I'vehadalongweekofsailingonthisship,soI’mgoingtostayinmybedandkickback.”

Hismateswerelikeservantsandobeyedimmediately.Theparrot,however;heardhiseveryword,andwantedtostayandlivewiththecaptain.Hehadaplan,andthenheflewdownandtickledamate’stoe.Thematelaughed,andtheparrotstopped.Whenthematepaidattentiontotheparrot,thematesaid,“Howareyoudoing?”theparrotanswered,“Great;howareyoudoing?”“Nottoobad,thanks;”“Takeiteasy,”theysoonbecamefriends,andchattedallalong,“So,canyougivemeahometoliveontheship?”“Surething,pieceofcake;”whentheygottheparrotontheship;thecaptaincameout,andbecamefriendswiththeparrotalso.

Theparrotgavehimadvice,andhebecamewealthyandreturnedallthegold,butkeptthetreasurehefoundhimselfonotherislands.Ifpeopletroubletheparrot,thecaptainwithwhichwilldefeatthoseguyswithhismightysword.

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四年级:欧阳雨鹭

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