小学英文:A JOB THAT I HAVE FIGURED_2000字
IwasonedayreadingthenewspaperwhenIsawalittlekidfallingdownfromthesky;IwastheonlyonewhocansavehimintimeforIwasonthefirstfloor.Irushedoutofthebuilding,andranoutside.Iknewthatthiswasvery,veryextremelydangerous,butifthechildfallsdownhewillprobablydieofpain.Hebroughtabigblanket,andthenapillow,hecalculatedtheareawasa100percentsurethatthechildwouldnotdie.Thechildcamefalling,andfalling;“Poof!!”Helandedonthepillow.
Iwascuriousandgladthatthechildstillhadhislife,andgotarewardoffiftypoundsofgoldandonebagofsilver.Iwasveryhappy.Butwhenitwasnighttime,Iheardan“I’mcoming,”noise.Iwokeup,andsawabiglight,thenappearedalittleflyingcat!Thatwasvery,verystrange.Irubbedmyeyes,andpinchedeverywheretomakesurethatitwasn’tadream.Butitwastrue.Thecatsaid,“Hello,IamPlad,andIamahero;withmeyoucantransformandsavethedayeverytime.”
Iwasastonishedandsaid,“Excuseme,butwhydidyouchooseme?”theflyingcatreplied.“Becausethatyousavedafallingkid,andthatwasachallengetodefeat.Youarenowmyrightfulowner.”
Iputonaringthattheflyingcatgaveme,andwentbacktosleep.Inthemorning,Idecidedtotestoutmytransforming,“Plad,clawset!”andthenastrangethinghappened,Itransformedinto“Catnor!”Itriedmypowers,andthenIsawasortofbugthatIrecognize,“Ladybug!”IwasgoingtofindherwhenIfoundoutthatmyringwasflashing,Isaid,“Clawsoff!”thenItransformedback.Iwasveryexcitedtoenjoymyfirstlessonofbeingcatnor.Iwasquiteastonished,andhappy
Atnight,IthoughtIheardanothernoise,“Notagain!”suddenlyaroundofballcametomeagainandsaid,“Don’tworry,IamTeeky,andyoucatnorisgoingtoworkwithladybugtodefeatvillains.”
Iwasastonishedagain,andthenTeekyvanishedfromsight,
Idecidedtofollowher,butIthoughtmaybenexttime,forIdidn’twanttobotherthekidorgirlorotherpeoplefromsleeping.
AndsoIhavegotajobfromPladtosavetheworld.
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IwasonedayreadingthenewspaperwhenIsawalittlekidfallingdownfromthesky.IwastheonlyonewhocouldsavehimintimeforIwasonthefirstfloor.Irushedoutofthebuilding,andranoutside.Iknewthatthiswasextremelydangerous,butifthechildfelldownhewouldprobablydieofpain.Ibroughtabigblanket,andthenapillow.Aftercalculatingtheheight,Iwas100percentsurethatthechildwouldnotdie.Thechildkeptfalling,andfalling;“Poof!!”Helandedonthepillow.
Iwascuriousandgladthatthechildstillhadhislife,andIgotarewardoffiftypoundsofgoldandonebagofsilver.Iwasveryhappy.Butwhenitwasnighttime,Iheardan“I’mcoming,”noise.Iwokeup,andsawabigbeamoflight,thenappearedalittleflyingcat!Thatwasvery,verystrange.Irubbedmyeyes,andpinchedeverywheretomakesurethatitwasn’tadream.Butitwastrue.Thecatsaid,“Hello,IamPlad,andIamahero;withmeyoucantransformandsavethedayeverytime.”
Iwasastonishedandsaid,“Excuseme,butwhydidyouchooseme?”Theflyingcatreplied,“Becauseyousavedafallingkid,andthatwasachallengetodefeat.Youarenowmyrightfulowner.”
Iputonaringthattheflyingcatgaveme,andwentbacktosleep.Inthemorning,Idecidedtotestoutmytransforming,“Plad,clawset!”andthenastrangethinghappened,Itransformedinto“Catnor!”Itriedmypowers,andthenIsawasortofbugthatIrecognize,“Ladybug!”IwasgoingtofindherwhenIfoundoutthatmyringwasflashing,Isaid,“Clawsoff!”thenItransformedback.Iwasveryexcitedtoenjoymyfirstlessonofbeingcatnor.Iwasquiteastonished,andhappy.
Atnight,Iheardanothernoise,“Notagain!”Suddenlyaroundballcametomeagainandsaid,“Don’tworry,IamTeeky,andyoucatnorisgoingtoworkwithladybugtodefeatvillains.”
Iwasastonishedagain,andthenTeekyvanishedfromsight.
Idecidedtofollowher,butIthoughtmaybenexttime,forIdidn’twanttobotherthekidorgirlorotherpeoplefromsleeping.
AndsoIhavegotajobfromPladtosavetheworld.
四年级:欧阳雨鹭
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