小学英文：My Hobby_1000字

Ihavemanyhabits,buttodayIwouldliketoshareoneofmyhabitstoallofyou.Ilikeraisingfish.Oneofmymostimportantthingisfeedingfish.EverymorningafterIgetupIusuallygofeedingmyfish.First,Iopenabigbox.NextIopenasmallbottleinthebox.ThenIopenthebottleandtakeoutaspoonoffishfoodandgivethefish.Afterfeedingonetank,Ifeedtheothertank.Icannotfeedtoomuchortoolesssofishwon'tbeuncomfortable.Anotherimportantthingistochangethewaterforfish.Iusuallychangethewaterforfishonceaweeksothattheywillnotgetsick.Sometimesmyfishjumpsoutofthefishtank,soIhavetouseanettocatchthem!IusuallyusethedirtywatertowatermyplantsbecauseIcansavewater.Itisgoodtoourenvironment.Thatismyhabit--raisingfish.Itbringsmemuchhappiness.Forexample,myonlykoifish,Susie,ismyluckyfish.Itaccompaniesmefornearfouryears!IloveSusie,Ilovemyhabit--raisingfish.Canyoutellmeyours?

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Ihavemanyhobbies,buttodayIwouldliketoshareoneofmyhobbieswithallofyou.

Ilikeraisingfish.Oneofmymostimportantthingisfeedingfish.EverymorningIusuallygofeedingmyfishafterIgetup.Icannotfeedtoomuchortoolittlesofishwon'tbeuncomfortable.Anotherimportantthingistochangethewaterforfish.Iusuallychangethewateronceaweeksothattheywillnotgetsick.AndIusuallyusethedirtywatertowatermyplantsbecauseIcansavewater.Itisgoodtoourenvironment.Sometimesmyfishjumpsoutofthefishtank,soIhavetouseanettocatchthem!

Thatismyhobby--raisingfish.Itbringsmemuchhappiness.Forexample,myonlykoifish,Susie,ismyluckyfish.Ithasaccompaniedmefornearfouryears!Ilovemyraisingfish.Howaboutyourhobby?Canyoutellmeyours?

六年级:杨晋

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