小学英文：The downside of smartphone_1200字

Nowadays,therearemoreandmorepeopleplaywithphoneeverywhere,henceitisabigissueinoursociety.Somepeoplethinkthatphoneisanecessaryforthembecausetheyhavetokeepintouchwiththeirfriends,customsandparents.Instead,somepeoplethinkthatthephonenotonlywilldestroytheirrelationshipwithfriendsbutalsowillnotgoodfortheirhealth.

Somedoctorssaidthatifyouovertimeonusingit,itmaycauseyoureyesightisbecomingprogressivelyworse.Inaddition,youcanseeunusualsceneryinoursociety.Forexample,peoplebecomeindifferentandcoldbloodedbecausesomepeopleoverdependonphonetotalkeachother.Itisnotonlyaffectingyourphysicalhealthbutalsoaffectingyourspirithealth.What’sworse,phonewillproducesomeharmfulradiation.Itisreallyhurtourbrainbecauseitmaycauseyoumemorylessandevengetacancer.

However,phoneisnotalwaysnegativeinyourlife.Thereisaresearchsaidthatitisnotonlycankillyourtimebutcanalsoreduceyourstress.Therefore,wehavetolearnthathowtocontrolyourtimewhenyouuseit,andalsoknowthathowtouseitcorrectly.Intheend,youwillbeasuccessfulpersoninyourlife.

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Nowadays,therearemoreandmorepeopleplayingwiththeirphoneseverywhere,henceithasbeenabigissueinoursociety.Somepeoplethinkthatphonesarenecessaryforthembecausetheyhavetokeepintouchwiththeirfriends,customersandparents.Instead,somepeoplethinkthatphonesnotonlydestroytheirrelationshipwithfriendsbutalsoarenotgoodfortheirhealth.

Somedoctorssaythatifyouspendalongtimeonusingiteveryday,itmaycauseyoureyesightproblem.Inaddition,youcanseeunusualsceneryinoursociety.Forexample,peoplebecomeindifferentandcold-bloodedbecausetheymainlytalkwitheachotheronphone.Itnotonlyaffectsyourphysicalhealthbutalsoyourspirithealth.What’sworse,phonesalsoproducesomeharmfulradiationwhichreallyhurtsyourbrainbecauseitmaycauseyourmemoryproblemsandevengetacancer.

However,phoneisnotalwaysnegativeinyourlife.Thereisaresearchshowsthatitnotonlycankillyourtimebutcanalsoreducesyourstress.Therefore,wehavetolearnthathowtocontrolourtimewhenweuseit,andalsoknowthathowtouseitcorrectly.

修改老师：Crystal老师

三年级:黃欣欣

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