小学英文：A busy weekend_800字

Ihadabusyweekend.Ididlotsofthings.OnSaturdaymorning,Iwateredtheplants.Then,Isentsomeemailstomyfriends.Intheafternoon,Ididmyhomework.Then,Iplayedthepiano.Intheevening,Icleanedmyroombymyself.Then,MyfamilyandIvisitedfamilyandfriends.OnSundaymorning,Ifishedwithmybestfriend,Anna.Then,Ipaintedthepicture.Intheafternoon,Ireadaninterestingbook.Then,MymotherandIwenttothebeach.Theseawasbeautiful.Intheevening,Iateabigdinner.Thefoodwasspicyanddelicious.Then,Isawafilmatthecinema.Thefilmwasnice.IwasbusybutIwashappy.

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Ihadabusyweekend.Ididlotsofthings.OnSaturdaymorning,Iwateredtheplants.Then,Isentsomeemailstomyfriends.Intheafternoon,Ididmyhomework.Then,Iplayedthepiano.Intheevening,Icleanedmyroombymyself.Then,MyfamilyandIvisitedfamilyandfriends.

OnSundaymorning,Ifishedwithmybestfriend,Anna.Then,Ipaintedthepicture.Intheafternoon,Ireadaninterestingbook.Then,MymotherandIwenttothebeach.Theseawasbeautiful.Intheevening,Iateabigdinner.Thefoodwasspicyanddelicious.Then,Isawafilmatthecinema.Thefilmwasnice.IwasbusybutIwashappy.

六年级:李勤

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