小学英文：THE NEW PHONE_1500字

TherewasoncealittlegirlnamedMarythatwantedaphonesobadlythatherparentscouldn’thelpbearinghercrying;andsogotheraphonewithpurpledotsandalittlesmileyfaceonit.

Andsolifewentonasusual,untiloneday,whenshewaswalkingdowntown,shesawahouse,andfilledwithdecorations;sheknewatoncethatthishousewashavingapartywithsomebody.Perhapstheywerecelebratingabirthday,orHappyAnniversary…Maryreallywantedtoentertheparty,andsoaskedthemtoplease,pleaseletherinandhadagreattime.Sincetheyhadmorespacetheyhadtheoffer,buttheyhadarequestforhertograntthembeforetheyletherin.

Andthatrequestwastomakebreadforthepoorandbuymilkforthemtodrink.Thatsoundslikeaneasyrequesttogrant.Andsousedherphonetocallherdadandsotogetsomebreadandmilkforthepoortodeliver,buttherewasaproblem,“Noallowedphones!”criedtheownerofthehousestandingout,heheldontoMary’sphoneandpulleditoutofherhand;heerasedthetelephoneboxwhichwasinthelast,andsoMarycouldn’tcallherparents.Afterthatheerasedthemessageboxwhichwasinthefirst,lastofallhetookthebatteriesout,incaseshehadsomeotherplans.

“There,nowyoucouldn’tuseyourphoneanymore,”andtheownerwentinside.AndsopoorMaryusedherallowancewhichwasforanewdressfortheschoolparty,tobuybreadandmilkforthepoor;shewasverysad,andwentbackandsaidthatshehadfinishedherwork.

“Whereisyourproof?”askedtheowneragain,“I-Ididn’tknowyouwantedmetogiveyouproof?”“Wellthenyouareout,”andheclosedthedoortightly.

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TherewasoncealittlegirlnamedMarythatwantedaphonesobadlythatherparentscouldn’thelpbearinghercryingandgotheraphonewithpurpledotsandalittlesmileyfaceonit.

Solifewentonasusualuntiloneday.whenshewaswalkingdowntown,shesawahouse,filledwithdecorations.Sheknewatoncethatthishousewashavingapartyforsomebody.Perhapstheywerecelebratingabirthday,orHappyAnniversary…Maryreallywantedtoentertheparty,soshebeggedthemtoletherinandhaveagreattime.Theypromisedtoletherinaslongasshecoulddowhattheyasked.

Andthatrequestwastomakebreadforthepoorandbuymilkforthemtodrink.Thatsoundedlikeaneasyrequesttogrant,sosheusedherphonetocallherdadtogetsomebreadandmilkforthepoor.Buttherewasaproblem,“Nophonesallowed!”criedtheownerofthehousestandingout.HeheldontoMary’sphoneandpulleditoutofherhand.Hedeletedherphonenumbersandmessagebox,andthenhetookthebatteriesout,incaseshehadsomeotherplans.

“There,nowyoucouldn’tuseyourphoneanymore,”andtheownerwentinside.SopoorMaryusedherpocketmoneywhichwasforanewdressfortheschoolparty,tobuybreadandmilkforthepoor;shewasverysad,andwentbackandsaidthatshehadfinishedherwork.

“Whereisyourproof?”askedtheowneragain,“I-Ididn’tknowyouwantedmetogiveyouproof?”“Wellthenyouareout,”andheclosedthedoortightly.

四年级:欧阳雨鹭

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