初中英文：Zoo_450字

Ihadwenttoazoo!Iheldmyparents'handstightlyandwalkedourwaythroughthewholezoo.Alongtheway,wesawavarietyoffascinatinganimals.Theelephantsweresplashignwaterontoeachother.Theflamingoswerestandingelegantlyinthepond.Oh!Themonkeys!Theyaresonaughty!Theyswangacrossthetreesswiftlyandleapedintotheairvigorously.Itwassofun!IwishIcanholdmyparents'handsandpayavisittothezooagain!

修改后：

Iwenttothezoowithmyparents.Iheldmyparents'handstightlyandwalkedthroughthewholezoo.Ontheway,wesawavarietyoffascinatinganimals.Theelephantsweresplashingwaterontoeachother.Theflamingoswerestandingelegantlyinthepond.Oh!Themonkeys!Theyweresonaughty!Theyswangacrossthetreesswiftlyandleapedintotheairvigorously.Itwassofun!IwishIcanholdmyparents'handsandpayavisittothezooagain!

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