小学英文：THE NEW INVENTION_2000字

TherewasoncealittleboycalledNickthatwantedtohelpeveryoneinordertosavemoneyforthenewautomatictoyreview.

Afterafewmonthsofresearch,hehadfinallydiscoveredthattherewasgoingtobeabigstormandthewholetownwasgoingflood.Hedecidedthattodayisthedayhegetstheautomatictoyreviewer.Afterafewminuteshedrovehisautomatictraincarwhichhasmanybuttonsoutside;itwasjustrightforthefloodbegantoflowallaroundthetown.

Thenewsreporterstationwasjustabouttoreportthenewswhensuddenlyastrangenoisecamefromjustaroundthecorner,whatwasit?Wasitanautomatictraintosavethem;thatwasinit?Andwhatharmcouldittothemselves.Theystoodstilluntilalwaysthesoundcamebiggerandloudereverysecondthetimepasses;atlasttheautomatictraincarappearedandinsatalittleboywhowasNick.

EverybodyknewthatNickcouldn’tharmthemwiththetraincar,butitwastrue;Nickwasnotgoingtoharmbutinsteadisgoingtosavethewholetown,everybodybegantocheer.SomeofthetownspeopleevencameneartohelpNick;fortheydidn’twanttobedrownedeither.

Whenthefloodwasgone,thestormstopped,andthetownspeoplewereallsaved.TheythankedNick.ButNickstilldidn’tseeanypeoplegivinghimmoneyasa“thankyou.”AlltheydidwastellingthenewsreporterandreportedNickonthenews.EverybodyenjoyeditexceptNick,forwhathewantedwastheautomatictoyreviewer.

AfterthenewswasfinishedtheyrantoNick’shouse,Nickdidn’twanttoanswerfrohethoughtofwhattheyweregoingtosay.ItwasalreadydawnwhichwasalmosttimeforwatchingTV.EverybodybeggedNicktoletthemin.Nickdecidedjustforthisonce.

Whenheopenedthedoorhefoundpeoplestandingoutsidethedoorwithpursesintheirpocketsandsmilesontheirfaces.Nickknewthattheywerenotheretogivehimmoneytobutehautomatictoyreviewer;butitwasn’ttrue,whatthepeopledidwastohandouttheirpersonalpursestoNick.Nickknewatoncethathebarkedupthewrongtreeaboutthetownspeople;allhereallywantedtotheautomatictoyreviewer;hereceivedtheirpursesandatlastboughttheautomatictoyreviewer.ThattraincarwhichNickdroveouttosavetheotherpeople;thiswashisonlyoneinvention.

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TherewasoncealittleboycalledNickthatwantedtohelpeveryoneinordertosavemoneyforthenewautomatictoyreview.

Afterafewmonthsofresearch,hehadfinallydiscoveredthattherewasgoingtobeabigstormandthewholetownwouldsufferfromtheflood.Hedecidedthatdaywasthedayhegottheautomatictoyreviewer.Afewminuteslater,hedrovehisautomatictraincarwhichhasmanybuttonsoutside.Itwasjustrightbeforethefloodbegantoflowallaroundthetown.

Thenewsagencywasjustabouttoreportthenewswhenastrangenoisesuddenlycamefromjustaroundthecorner,whatwasit?Wasitanautomatictraintosavethem;whatwasinit?Andwhatharmcoulditdotothemselves.Theystoodstilluntilthesoundbecamebiggerandloudereverysecondthetimepassed;atlasttheautomatictraincarappearedandinsatalittleboywhowasNick.

EverybodyknewthatNickcouldn’tharmthemwiththetraincar,butitwastrue;Nickwasnotgoingtoharmbutwasgoingtosavethewholetowninstead.Everybodybegantocheer.SomeofthetownspeopleevencameneartohelpNick,fortheydidn’twanttobedrownedeither.

Whenthefloodwasgone,thestormstopped,andthetownspeoplewereallsaved.TheythankedNick.ButNickstilldidn’tseeanypeoplegivinghimmoneyasa“thankyou.”AlltheydidwastellingthenewsreporterandreportedNickonthenews.EverybodyenjoyeditexceptNick,forwhathewantedwastheautomatictoyreviewer.

Afterthenews,theyrantoNick’shouse,Nickdidn’twanttoanswerthem.ItwasalreadydawnwhichwasalmosttimeforwatchingTV.EverybodybeggedNicktoletthemin.Nickdecidedtogivethemachance.

Whenheopenedthedoorhefoundpeoplestandingoutsidethedoorwithpursesintheirpocketsandsmilesontheirfaces.Nickknewthattheywerenotheretogivehimmoneytobuytheautomatictoyreviewer;butitwasn’ttrue,whatthepeopledidwastohandouttheirpersonalpursestoNick.Nickknewatoncethathebarkedupthewrongtreeaboutthetownspeople.Allhereallywantedwastheautomatictoyreviewer;hereceivedtheirpursesandatlastboughttheautomatictoyreviewer.ThattraincarwhichNickdroveouttosavetheotherpeoplewashisonlyinvention.

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