小学英文:My Last Weekend_250字

时间:2024-11-10 18:44:29 来源:作文网 作者:管理员

Hi,everyone,mynameisVivian.MychinesenameisSunJingyi.Lastweekendwashappy.OnSaturdaymoring,Ididmyhomeworkandslept.Atnoon,IwatchedTV,it'veryfunny.Intheafternoon,IwenttotheZhong Shan Park.It's so great! 

 Ilike my last weekend.

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Hi,everyone,mynameisVivian.MyChinesenameisSunJingyi.LastweekendIwashappy.OnSaturdaymoring,Ididmyhomeworkandwentsleeping.Atnoon,IwatchedTVwhichwasveryfunny.Intheafternoon,IwenttotheZhongShanParkandIhadagreattimethere.

Ilikemyweekend.

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