小学英文：My annoying brother!_800字

IhaveabrothercalledJason.Hehastwobigeyes,onebigmouse,tallerthantheP4studentseventhoughtheisinP2!andblackhair,heisthemostannoyinginmyholefamily!Everyday,hefollowmeandaskmetolistentohimandsaidheismybrother!Ifidon'tlistentohim,hewillbeverymadandtalktoyouforeveruntilyouwilllistentohim!onetime,helosthispenandihadthesameoneasthepenhehadlost,sohestartedtoblamedmeeventhoughididnotstillhispenandtalktalktalkuntiligivehimmypen!Atnight,hewillaskyoutotellhimastoryandifyoudon't,hewilldosomethingdoesverydisgustinglikeputisfingerintohismouseandafterhewillputhisfingerontoyourface!

THISISMYANNOYINGBROTHER!

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IhaveabrothercalledJason.Hehastwobigeyes,onebigmouseandblackhair.HeistallerthanmostofthestudentsinP4eventhoughheisinP2!Heisthemostannoyingpersoninmyfamily!

Hefollowsmeandasksmetolistentohimeveryday.Why?Hesaysheismybrother!IfIdon'tlistentohim,hewillbeverymadandtalktoyouuntilIlistentohim!Oneday,helosthispen.AndIhadasamepenasthelostone,sohestartedtoblamedmeeventhoughIdidnotstealhispen.HehadtroubledmealotuntilIgavehimmypen!

Atnight,healwaysasksmetotellhimastory.IfIdon'tdoit,hewilldosomethingdisgusting

likeputtinghisfingerintohismouthandthenputthefingerontomyface!

THISISMYANNOYINGBROTHER!

修改老师：

Andy老师

四年级:JessieXu

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