小学英文：SPRING_700字

inthespring,wecanflyingkite.springaverybeautiful.IBelieveeveryonelovespring.inthespring,iheveapicnicinthepark.welooksomeducksinthepond,theyarelovely,skynothaveaclouds.sotodayoutofthequestionrainsoon.Iheardtheweatherforecast‘’itwillbesunnyinshandong''.weareintheparkthesunisshiningandthewindisblowing,lindaandiareplayinghindeandseek.thebirdsaresinging.therabbitsarejimping.theweatherisverygood.amaniswearingabighat.someclildrenarejumpinginthewater.wearehavingalovelytime！Bye-bye.

修改后：

Sringisverybeautiful.Ibelieveeveryonelovesspring.Inspring,wecanflykites.Inspring,wecanhaveapicnicinthepark.There,wecanseesomelovelyducksplayinginthepond.Thesunisshiningbrightly,thewindisblowinggentlyandthebirdsaresinginghappily.LindaandIareplayinghideandseek.Theweatherisverygood.Wearehavingagreattime.

修改老师：Crystal老师

六年级:管晓宇

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