小学英文：THE TINKER PLANTS A TREE_1500字
Therewasoncealittleboy,whowasmygrandpa;livedinalittlecottageneartheking’spalace.Hewasajollyfellowinhislife.
Oneday,hewentdowntothebrooktopicksomeflowers.Closetothebrookwasalittlelog,onitwasatinker.Besidehimwasatoolbox,andinitweresometools.“Hemustbetheonethatfixedtheplumingmachineinthebackyardofmyhouse!”mygrandpagaspedashesaidthat.Thetinkerwaseatinghislunch:Oneortwopiecesofbread,abitofcoldmeat,andacoldpotato.Itlookedsuchpoorlunch;thatgrandparanintothehouse,andgrabbedtwofreshapples,andgaveittothetinker.Thetinkerthankedgrandpaandatetheapples.Andthenhewentdowntothebrooktohaveadrink.Whenhecameback,hesaid,“Nowmyboy,weshallplantatree!”“Atree?”askedgrandpa,“ButIthoughtonlygodmakestrees!’’“True,”saidthetinker,“Onlygodmakestrees.Butsometimeswecouldhelphim.Andthetinkerpulledoutastick,anddugaholeinit.Inwhichhefoundabark.Hetookthebarkoutofthestick,andgavethesticktograndpa,saying,“Heremyboy;washitinthebrook.”Andsograndpawenttothebrook,andwashedupthestick.Andthenwentbackofwhichthetinkerwasstandingwiththebarkinhishands.
Therehefoundthetinker,draggingsomegrassfromtheground.Andthenhetookthestickingrandpa’shand,andusedthegrasstotieuparoundwiththebark.Thenheslippedthebarkbackinthestick.Andthenhetookitout,squeezedthewaterout,andtoldgrandpatowashitupagain.Whenhecameback,heputthebarkbackinitagain.Andthenfitteditintoahole,whichhehaddug;andusedtheendthatdidn’thaveahole,andfitteditintheground;afewmonthspassed,andthetreegrewasstrongasthestrongestman.
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Therewasoncealittleboy,whowasmygrandpa;livedinalittlecottageneartheking’spalace.Hewasajollyfellowinhislife.
Oneday,hewentdowntothebrooktopicksomeflowers.Closetothebrookwasalittlelog,onitwasatinker.Besidehimwasatoolbox,andinitweresometools.“Hemustbetheonethatfixedtheplumingmachineinmybackyard!”mygrandpagaspedashesaidthat.Thetinkerwashavinghislunch:Oneortwopiecesofbread,abitofcoldmeat,andacoldpotato.Itlookedsuchpoorlunch;thatgrandparanintothehouse,andgrabbedtwofreshapples,andgaveittothetinker.Thetinkerthankedgrandpaandatetheapples.Andthenhewentdowntothebrooktohaveadrink.Whenhecameback,hesaid,“Nowmyboy,weshallplantatree!”“Atree?”askedgrandpa,“ButIthoughtonlygodmakestrees!’’“True,”saidthetinker,“Onlygodmakestrees.Butsometimeswecouldhelphim.Andthetinkerpulledoutastick,anddugaholeinit.Inwhichhefoundabark.Hetookthebarkoutofthestick,andgavethesticktograndpa,saying,“Heremyboy;washitinthebrook.”Andsograndpawenttothebrook,andwashedupthestick.Andthenhewentbackwherethetinkerwasstandingwiththebarkinhishands.
Therehefoundthetinker,draggingsomegrassfromtheground.Andthenhetookthestickingrandpa’shand,andusedthegrasstotieuparoundwiththebark.Thenheslippedthebarkbackinthestick.Andthenhetookitout,squeezedthewaterout,andtoldgrandpatowashitupagain.Whenhecameback,heputthebarkbackinitagain.Andthenfitteditintoahole,whichhehaddug;andusedtheendthatdidn’thaveahole,andfitteditintheground;afewmonthspassed,andthetreegrewasstrongasthestrongestman.
四年级:欧阳雨鹭
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