小学英文：FROM MY DIARY_2000字

Everybodyknowswhatweshoulddowhensomebodyisintrouble,fromcountrytocountry;manypeoplehelpedsomepoormen.Iamveryhappytofinallywritemydiary,andnowIwilltellofaveryfunnystoryofalittlegirlwholivedamongthecamps.

Staciewantedtoliveinabighotelfortheholidays,butherparentssenthertoaterriblecampinstead.Stacielovedjuiceandchocolatemilkforbreakfast,butshegotwateratthecamp.IntheafternoonStaciewantedtowritepoems,butshehadtoswim;therewerespiderwebshangingabovethetentsinwhichStacieslept,shehateit!

OnedayStacieandherclasswerelearningaboutwatersafety,andhowwaterwasusedforcompetingagainstfire.Finallywhentheteacherdecidedthatthechildrenweregoodenough,shehiredsomeboatsandletthechildrenrideonitandhavefun;Staciehadneverplannedtogoonaboat.Intheafternoontheyplayedagame;thechildrenweredividedintotwogroups,theredteamandtheblueteam;Staciewasontheblueteam.Theruleofthegameistoshootwithwatergunstotheotherteam’splayerandfindtheotherteamsflaginthepole.Next,theteamplayerhadtogettheflagoutofthepoleandgiveittotheteacher,andthatteamhadwon!

Theteacherfilledallofthechildrengunswithwater,andthentheybegantoplay.AlittleboysaidtoStacie,“Stacie,”hesaid,“Yougototheleft,Iwillgoright,andthosetwoshallgofront.”Staciestilldidn’twanttoplay.Staciewalkedleft;suddenlyshesawoneoftheredteamplayers.Shehidbehindatreeandjumpedoutandshottheteamplayerwithherwatergun,“Thisisfun!”shecrieddelighted.

Soonafterwardsshesawtheredteamflag.Oneoftheredteamplayerswaswatchingoverit.Stacieshothimwithherwatergun,andgottheflagoutfromthepole.Finallyshegottheredflagoutofthepole,sherantoherteacherimmediatelyshouting,“I’vegotit!I’vegotit!”theblueteamhadwonagainsttheredteam;Staciewastheherooftheday.

FortheredoftheholidaysStaciehadfun,sheevenmadenewfriends.

Whatdoesthisstorytellyou?Ifyouhadnottriedthefunthenyouwillneverknowtheend.Ilovewritingmydiaries,andtellingthesestoriestoyou.

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Everybodyknowswhatweshoulddowhensomebodyisintrouble,fromcountrytocountry;manypeoplehelpedsomepoormen.Iamveryhappytofinallywritemydiary,andnowIwilltellaveryfunnystoryofalittlegirlwholivedamongthecamps.

Staciewantedtoliveinabighotelfortheholidays,butherparentssenthertoaterriblecampinstead.Stacielovedjuiceandchocolatemilkforbreakfast,butshegotwateratthecamp.IntheafternoonStaciewantedtowritepoems,butshehadtoswim;therewerespiderwebshangingabovethetentsinwhichStacieslept,shehateit!

OnedayStacieandherclasswerelearningaboutwatersafety,andhowwaterwasusedforcompetingagainstfire.Finallywhentheteacherdecidedthatthechildrenweregoodenough,sherentsomeboatsandletthechildrenrideonitandhavefun;Staciehadneverplannedtogoonaboat.Intheafternoontheyplayedagame;thechildrenweredividedintotwogroups,theredteamandtheblueteam;Staciewasontheblueteam.Theruleofthegameistoshootwithwatergunstotheotherteam’splayerandfindtheotherteam’sflaginthepole.Next,theteamplayerhadtogettheflagoutofthepoleandgiveittotheteacher,andthatteamwouldwin!

Theteacherfilledallofthechildrengunswithwaterandthentheybegantoplay.AlittleboysaidtoStacie,“Stacie,”hesaid,“Yougototheleft,Iwillgoright,andthosetwoshallgofront.”Staciestilldidn’twanttoplay.Staciewalkedleft;suddenlyshesawoneoftheredteamplayers.Shehidbehindatreeandjumpedoutandshottheteamplayerwithherwatergun,“Thisisfun!”shecrieddelighted.

Soonafterwardsshesawtheredteamflag.Oneoftheredteamplayerswaswatchingoverit.Stacieshothimwithherwatergun,andgottheflagoutfromthepole.Finallyshegottheredflagoutofthepole,sherantoherteacherimmediatelyshouting,“I’vegotit!I’vegotit!”theblueteamhadwonagainsttheredteam;Staciewastheherooftheday.

FortherestoftheholidaysStaciehadfun,sheevenmadenewfriends.

Whatdoesthisstorytellyou?Ifyouhadnottriedthefunthenyouwillneverknowtheend.Ilovewritingmydiariesandtellingthesestoriestoyou.

四年级:欧阳雨鹭

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