小学英文：THE INVENTOR MIKE_3000字

Therewasonceaboythatlikedmakingthingsandreadingbooks.

Onedayhewasreadingaboutabook,whichtellsalittlegirlcalledCindy;metwithadangerousadventurethroughthewoods.Butinitweremanychallengeswhichallowedhertobefamous.Mikewantedtobejustlikethelittlegirlinthestory,butcouldhedothisonhisown?

Mikedecidedtotryit,forhereadabookaboutmanystories;amongthemwasatalethattellsifyoudon’ttryitthenyouwillneverlearntowalk.AndsoMikegrabbedhisbagandwentouthishomewhichjusthappenedtobeinthewoods.Ashewonderedaboutinthewoods,hecouldnottellwhichwaytogo,forthereweretoomanytreesthatareallalike.Sincehedidn’thaveamap,hejustturnedincircles.Atlasthefoundalittlepassagewaywhichledtoalittlebridge.

Mikedidnotknowwhatwasontheothersideofthebridge,withouteventhinkinghebeganwalking.Ashecrossedthebridge,hefoundthreewalls.Andovertheothersaidwasadarkcave.Mikedidnotlookatthewalls,hebegantowalk.Butasheapproachedthefirstwall,hefoundonesideofitgreenandtheotheryellow.“Theremustbeatrapbetweenthesepairs!”hethought.Andsohetookastepbackward,tohissurprisehefoundalittlesign,onthesignweretheseword:Ifyouwanttogoinsidethecave,thenyoumustpassthesetests.Thefirsttestisthatyoumustbeabletofindoutawallthatwillleadyoutoagarden.Inthatgardenyoumustfindafourleavedcloverandarose.Mikestartedtothinkaboutthisproblem.

Hethoughtofthewordswhichhismotherhadtoldhimbeforeshedied.“Rememberson,greenmeansgarden;redmeansdanger,orangemeanslucky;andyellowmeansdeath.”Mikethought,‘Greenmeansgarden,yellowmeansdeath!I’vegotit!Imustgothroughthegreenwall!”andsowithoutevensayingaword,heenteredthegreenwall,andtherehefoundalovelygarden,“Iknewit!Ididit!Nowtofindafourleavedcloverandarose.”Mikethenbegantolookforthosethings.

Atlasthefoundafourleavedcloverbehindabush,andarosenearthefountain.Mikethenwentthroughthegreenwallagain,andsoonwasbackwherethetwowallswere.Hethencrossedthetwowallsslowly,“Idon’tseewhyIwouldhavetogettheseingredients?Whataretheyfor?”hethought.Suddenlyhecametothesecondpairofwalls.Thistime,hefoundalittlehole,hethoughttohimself,“WhatshouldIputinsideit?Idon’thaveanything?”Suddenly,hefoundoutthathehadafourleavedcloverandarose.Heputtheminsidetheholeandthenhecouldwalkpassit.“Lookslikethefourleavedcloverandtherosearehelpfultome.”

ThelasttestcametoMike;itwasamathproblem;“1+2+3+4+5+6+7…+98+99+100.”“Thisiseasy!”criedMike.Hewrotetheanswer“5050.”AtlastthegateopenedandMikewalkedinside.Hefoundmanymaterialsandusedthemtoinventthings.

Didyouknowthatoneday,Mikewentoutandwashurtbyasharpplant.DuringthatdiscoveryMikewenttohisworkshop,andbeganinventingsomething.Thattimeitwas1865,andMikeinventedtheknife.Afterthat,heinventedmanythings,andwasknownasthegreatinventorMike.

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Therewasonceaboythatlikedmakingthingsandreadingbooks.

Onedayhewasreadingabook,whichtellsalittlegirlcalledCindy;metwithadangerousadventurethroughthewoods.Butinitweremanychallengeswhichallowedhertobefamous.Mikewantedtobejustlikethelittlegirlinthestory,butcouldhedothisonhisown?

Mikedecidedtotryit,forhereadabookaboutmanystories;amongthemwasatalethattellsifyoudon’ttryitthenyouwillneverlearntowalk.SoMikegrabbedhisbagandwentouthishomewhichjusthappenedtobeinthewoods.Ashewonderedaboutinthewoods,hecouldnottellwhichwaytogo,forthereweretoomanytreesthatareallalike.Sincehedidn’thaveamap,hejustturnedincircles.Atlasthefoundalittlepassagewaywhichledtoalittlebridge.

Mikedidnotknowwhatwasontheothersideofthebridge,withouteventhinkinghebeganwalking.Ashecrossedthebridge,hefoundthreewalls.Andovertheothersaidwasadarkcave.Mikedidnotlookatthewalls,hebegantowalk.Butasheapproachedthefirstwall,hefoundonesideofitgreenandtheotheryellow.“Theremustbeatrapbetweenthesepairs!”hethought.Andsohetookastepbackward,tohissurprisehefoundalittlesign,onthesignweretheseword:Ifyouwanttogoinsidethecave,thenyoumustpassthesetests.Thefirsttestisthatyoumustbeabletofindoutawallthatwillleadyoutoagarden.Inthatgardenyoumustfindafourleavedcloverandarose.Mikestartedtothinkaboutthisproblem.

Hethoughtofthewordswhichhismotherhadtoldhimbeforeshedied.“Rememberson,greenmeansgarden;redmeansdanger,orangemeanslucky;andyellowmeansdeath.”Mikethought,‘Greenmeansgarden,yellowmeansdeath!I’vegotit!Imustgothroughthegreenwall!”andwithoutevensayingaword,heenteredthegreenwall,andtherehefoundalovelygarden,“Iknewit!Ididit!Nowtofindafourleavedcloverandarose.”Mikethenbegantolookforthosethings.

Atlasthefoundafourleavedcloverbehindabush,andarosenearthefountain.Mikethenwentthroughthegreenwallagain,andsoonwasbackwherethetwowallswere.Hethencrossedthetwowallsslowly,“Idon’tseewhyIwouldhavetogettheseingredients?Whataretheyfor?”hethought.Suddenlyhecametothesecondpairofwalls.Thistime,hefoundalittlehole,hethoughttohimself,“WhatshouldIputinsideit?Idon’thaveanything?”Suddenly,hefoundoutthathehadafourleavedcloverandarose.Heputtheminsidetheholeandthenhecouldwalkpassit.“Lookslikethefourleavedcloverandtherosearehelpfultome.”

ThelasttestcametoMike;itwasamathproblem;“1+2+3+4+5+6+7…+98+99+100.”“Thisiseasy!”criedMike.Hewrotetheanswer“5050.”AtlastthegateopenedandMikewalkedinside.Hefoundmanymaterialsandusedthemtoinventthings.

Didyouknowthatoneday;Mikewentoutandwashurtbyasharpplant.DuringthatdiscoveryMikewenttohisworkshop,andbeganinventingsomething.Itwas1865atthattime,andMikeinventedtheknife.Afterthat,heinventedmanythingsandwasknownasthegreatinventorMike.

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