小学英文：hug in spring_700字

whenspringcomes,everythingisgreen.howbeautrfulthespring!thebreathofspring,embracespring!inspring.thegrassspitthebud,addedatracceofgreenforspring.theyarefullofvitality,growinthearmsofthespring.thousandsofthebirdschatteringtogetherwithmanyflowers,flowersdoo--yan.thechlidrenplayinginthebeautifulscenery,play.embracedinthespring.theriver,rowsofwillowyiyiaffectionate,blowinginthewind,gentlyswingingsongs,waterfowlgentlyjimponit,thewatershimmeringcorrugatedlines.let'sembracetheincomprablybeautifuispring!

修改后：

Whenspringcomes,everythingturnsgreen.Howbeautifulthespringis!Inspring,treesbegintospitthebud,addingsomegreentospring.Theyarefullofvitality,growinginthearmsofthespring.Thousandsofbirdsarechatteringtogether.Thewindisblowinggently.Thechlidrenareplayinginthebeautifulscenery.Let'sembracethebeautifuispring!

修改老师：Crystal老师

四年级:李名扬

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