小学英文：REBOUND_2000字

Itwasallthatcouldbedoneforthewholewideworld,fortherewasonlyoneofthemanthatcaremostlyforhimthanitistootherthingsorobjectsorthingslikethat;wellmostlyhecaredforhimselfasIsaid.

Onedayhewasgoingtoworkwhenhefoundaverybigrock.Heloveditandsocarriedittowork;whenhewastherehiscompanionsarguedwithhimbecauserockswerenotallowedinhisofficeorhisworkareaIsaid.

Themandidn’tcareforasIhadsaidbeforethisgreedymancaredthemostwashimandnotothers.Whenitwasattheendofthedaythemanwenthomeandofcoursewenttothemirrortolookathimselfperfectly.Whenitwastimeforanotherdayatwork,themanwasvery,very,verysad;forhisrockwasgone.Nowitallhappenedthattherewasthisrockcollectorthatwantedtocollectalltherocksinhiscountry.

Whenhiscompanionstoldhimaboutthathewasnothappytohearit,andsothemanhaddecidedtogoonanadventuretofindtheonethathadstolenhisrock;eventhoughhedidn’tevenknowwhathelookslike,buthehadasickplanwhichwillfooltheonethatwon’tconfesshisfault.Aftergivingorpreparingthethingshe’llneed,hehoppedonhisscooteranddrewofftofindtheguythathewassearchingfor.

Theguywassoonfoundoutandwhenhehadbeencaughtbythepolice,thenthattimewastheguy’send.Everybodywashappytogettheirrockback,andeventhoughtheyknewthatrocksdidn’thavetheirlives;theywerestillhappytogether.Nowyouknowthemeaningofrebound,itmeans:Whenyoudoabadthingthenanotherbadthingwillhappentoyou.Ihopethisstorywillteachyousomethingimportant.

Andfortheonethathadstolentherocksfromotherpeople,heknewhisownfault,butitwastoolatetoconfessit…

Eveniftheguydidn’tgotojail,hestillknewhisownfaultandIam100percentsurethathewillconfessittooyouknow…

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Itwasallthatcouldbedoneforthewholewideworld,fortherewasonlyoneofthemanthatcaremostlyforhimthanotherthings.

Onedayhewasgoingtoworkwhenhefoundaverybigrock.Heloveditandcarriedittowork.Whenhewasthere,hiscompanionsarguedwithhimbecauserockswerenotallowedinhisofficeorhisworkarea.

AsIhadsaidbefore,thisgreedymancaredthemostwashimselfandnotothers.Whenitwasattheendoftheday,themanwenthomeandofcoursewenttothemirrortolookathimselfperfectly.Whenitwastimeforanotherdayatwork,themanwasverysad;forhisrockwasgone.Someonesaiditmusthavebeenstolenbyarockcollectorwhowantedtocollectalltherocksinhiscountry.

Whenhiscompanionstoldhimaboutthathewasnothappytohearit,sothemandecidedtogoonanadventuretofindtheonethathadstolenhisrock;eventhoughhedidn’tevenknowwhathelookedlike,hehadasickplanwhichwouldfooltheonethatwon’tconfesshisfault.Afterpreparingthethingsheneeded,hehoppedonhisscooteranddrewofftofindtheguythathewassearchingfor.

Theguywassoonfoundoutandhewascaughtbythepolice.Everybodywashappytogettheirrockback,eventhoughtheyknewthatrocksdidn’thavetheirlives;theywerestillhappytogettogether.

Nowyouknowthemeaningofrebound,itmeans:Whenyoudoabadthingthenanotherbadthingwillhappentoyou.Ihopethisstorywillteachyousomethingimportant.

四年级:欧阳雨鹭

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