小学英文：Hug in spring_650字
Springiscoming,thebirdflewbackfromthesouth.Let'sembracespring!
Inthespring,allthingsrecovery.Thegrassandwillowtreesproutedinthegrowthofslowly.Thetwitteringswallows,alsodon'tknowwhattosay.Naughtychildren,inthefieldwillalwayspulloutapieceofgreenbristlegrass,diaointhemouth,thenleisurelylyingontheground.Pear,peachblossomtreebranchesallthefullofflowers.Sometimes,therearetwochildrentooboring,pickedupthevariouskiteplayup.Spring,theseasonofspringouting.Inthisseason,flowers,naturaltoseetoomuch.Parksarecrowdedwithpeople,justbeforeaplantflowerssurroundpeoplealsohaveadozen.
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Springiscoming,thebirdshaveflownbackfromthesouth.Let'sembracespring!
Inspring,allthingscometolife.Thegrassandwillowtreessproutslowly.Theswallowsareflyingaroundandtwittering.Naughtychildreninthefieldalwayspickupthegreenbristlegrass,putinginthemouthandlyingontheground.Pear,peachblossomtreebranchesareallfullofflowers.Sometimes,therearechildrenflyingkites.Spring,istheseasonforouting.Inthisseason,parksarealwayscrowdedwithpeoplewhocometosmelltheflowersandenjoythemselves.
修改老师：Crystal老师
五年级:范韶康
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