小学英文:深海_400字

时间:2024-09-21 01:29:02 来源:作文网 作者:管理员

Thatdeepblue,Itreflectsthebluesky.Thefreefish,Toswimslowly,Noonetostopthem.Nomatterwhetherheisonthesurfaceoftheripple,andnomatterhequietlyshedthelightofthesun,Gotothedeepsea.Thewaterthereismorecold,theairpressureishigher,themoreblack.Onlyafewfishliveinwhere.Butthatismorequiet,noonedisturb.Dark,andlonely,Thatisthedeepsea.

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Lookingthroughthatdeepblue,itreflectsthebluesky.Youcanseethefreefishswimslowly.Noonestopsthem,nomatterheisonthesurfaceoftheripple,orhequietlyshedthelightofthesun.Gotothedeepsea,thewaterthereismuchcolder,andthepressureismuchhigher.Onlyafewfishcanlivewhere.Dark,quietandlonely.Thatisthedeepsea.

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