高中读后续写

续写积累

姓名：______________ 班级：_______________

一、环境描写的素材

环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描

。

写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大

客观环境描写：

Part 1 环境描写的adj 要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道

the blue sky ．Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar）

1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain, 一?阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。

2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。

3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park凉. 爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。

4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair. ．Water

声音：1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.

在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。

颜色2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface. 水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。

3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank.

闪耀

。

,有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾

离此不远

4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother.

细细

私语。

似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲

三) ．Sky

1.The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.

天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵云

2.Blue skies stood tall and far蓝蓝的天空高高耸立

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