剑桥雅思15test1小作文

六月份晚9点45分，阮恩教师取得了剑桥大学15的完全版的PDF，马上进行了对创作一部分的详细说明。

* 自小优秀作文每日任务的视角来讲，剑桥大学15的4个Test各自采用了柱图、曲线图、流程表、饼 表组合图。

* 实际意义有二：

一、填补往日剑桥大学考试真题集中化一部分图型出現的太少，涮羊肉欠缺学习培训和写作的考试真题素材图片。

二、巨大地提醒了将来官考中小型优秀作文一部分出卷的宏观经济发展趋势：全部图型种类必须娴熟，往日的复习招数也许要凉。

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大家从Test 1的小作文盘起



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柱形图是雅思小作文在今年的钟爱。

实际上，阮恩教师一直在讲：看透图型方式，见到图型的实质。那麼，较为数据信息中间的尺寸关系几乎全是下列4点：

內容考察点：寻找数据的不同点关系显著的地区。

构造考察点：描述不同点关系的语句中间假如连贯性。

语汇考察点：描述尺寸、水平等的修饰词/介词/专有名词。

英语的语法考察点：描述较为关系的英语的语法和语法。

Test 1中的图型：信息量偏大，信息关系繁杂。进到“三生三世凉凉”难度系数区。

破题的2个层面：

1)依据小方框里的3种buying and drinking habits观查和分拆图上的数据信息。

2)依据淘宝主图纵坐标的横坐标上的五个城市观察和分拆图上的数据信息。

依照第一个层面设计构思优秀作文，示范性以下：

Five of Australia’s cities are surveyed in terms of people’s buying and drinking coffee and tea during the recent 4-week time. ← 这儿留意：这一信息沒有再题目中出現，可是在主图下方的小方框里出現了。这一信息很重要，由于拥有时间状语就要求了大家描述数据信息时常用的时态。The results, illustrated in bars, indicate some difference between the three habits. ← 鲜红色一部分提醒阅读者大家的构思是“依据3种buying and drinking habits来进行创作”。这一提醒很重要，由于拥有对行为主体一部分內容构思的提醒，考官读的情况下，会觉得思索工作压力并不大，轻轻松松舒适，给分便会无私。另外，留意一个关键点：some difference这儿，用的是difference的不可数实际意义，指含糊的常用的差别那样一个定义，而不是实际的差别或不同点，因此沒有转述s末尾。

Overall, people, wanting either of the drinks, were more likely to visit a café than were they to buy fresh or instant coffee, ← GRA：比较级 and in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart, the preference wasobvious, ← LR：描述水平的修饰词 represented by that more than 60 percent of people bought the drink from a café. In fact, ← CC：正确引导“进一步”的信息although Adelaide saw the exception to the overall situation, ← CC：妥协状语从句表述了信息中间的关系 visiting a café was only one percent behind← LR：描述数据信息中间关系的介词 people’s first choice —buying instant coffee—and had a percentage approximating to 50.

另外，留意一个语汇点：实意代词的应用来精减表述。这一段出現了preference和choice，取代小方框里得出的实际的个人行为。

Buying fresh coffee draws attention for its particularly low← LR：描述水平的修饰词popularity, ← LR：实意代词significantly lower ← LR：描述水平的修饰词 than that of the other options, in Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart, where only← LR：描述水平的介词 fewer than 40 percent or even 35 percent of the city residents made this choice← LR：实意代词during the past 4 weeks. The situation was better← LR：描述水平的修饰词 in Sydney and Melbourne. Meanwhile, ← CC：正确引导“平行面/并排”的信息 instant coffee, as people’s second choice, ← LR：实意代词should not be missed, and its popularity parallels that of fresh coffee in some cities and that of café coffee in others.

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解释将会的疑虑：

1)问：沒有conclusion?答：方式上沒有，內容上在introduction的最后一句有对图型的overview，因此写作构造上沒有conclusion了。

2)问：语汇简易?答：是的，但也不是的。文中的用语重中之重没有修饰词，这些语汇保证精确就可以。文中的措辞的匠心独运取决于：实意代词、表述较为关系的形容词和介词、一些小作文常中的通用性词没有用最普遍的词。

3)问：如何GRA的评分点不显著?答：并沒有。细心看一下主语的多元性;细心看一下状语和定语的形式多样和部位。

依照第二个层面设计构思优秀作文，示范性以下：

【文中无关键点注释，可参照上一篇了解】

Five of Australia’s cities are surveyed in terms of people’s buying and drinking coffee and tea during the recent 4-week time. The results, illustrated in bars, indicate some diversity among the five cities.

Adelaide draws the immediate attention. ← 总分结构显著，有利于阅读者阅读文章。“哄考官高兴得高分数”。→ The distinction, between this city and the others, lies not only in that a café was not so popular a destination as in the other four cities but also in that a café was not even the first choice of the city’s people. This is represented by the barely-50-percent figure. Also, Adelaide was one of the two cities—the other being Brisbane—that had the lowest percentage in buying fresh coffee.

In the other cities, there was a common situation. ← 总分结构显著，有利于阅读者阅读文章。“哄考官高兴得高分数”。→ People, wanting either of the drinks, were more likely to visit a café than were they to buy fresh or instant coffee, and in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart, the preference, in percentage terms, was exceeding 60 or approximating to 65. In fact, Sydney parallels Melbourne in terms of the order of people’s preference.

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