剑桥15test1小作文范文

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

邵教授解析

不会表述的英文

图中圆形包围的部分，叫做什么？

这叫做T字路，并且和 Hospital Road 相连

the T-junction with Hospital Road





容易忽视的信息

它在 ring road 中处于什么位置？

ring road 南侧中间的部分

in the centre of the southern section

不会表述的英文

图中圆形包围的部分，叫做什么？

Hospital Road 和 City Road 交叉的十字路口

the crossroads with City Road

容易忽视的信息

图中方框包围的部分是 bus stop，它们是如何排布的？

一边3个

不会表述的英文

图中圆形包围的部分，如何表达？

access to both roundabouts mentioned above

容易忽视的信息

图中方框包围的部分是 car park, 它的长度和 Hospital Road 的长度相同

stretched the full length of the east side of Hospital Road

不会表述的英文

图中圆形包围的部分，叫做什么？

an access point





容易忽视的信息

它在 ring road 中处于什么位置？

in the south-east of the ring road





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英国老师范文

开头段

The access routes to a hospital in 2007 and 2010 are shown in the upper and lower maps respectively.





主体段1：总体介绍主要的变化

It is clear that the ring road surrounding the hospital itself was largely unchanged between 2007 and 2010. However, the transport infrastructure was considerably upgraded, most notably with the addition of two roundabouts, and the expansion of the car parking and bus facilities.





主体段2：和 ring road 相关的变化，顺带写了另一个 roundabout

With regard to the ring road, the only change seen in 2010, compared to 2007, was the construction of a roundabout in the centre of the southern section, in place of the original T-junction with Hospital Road. At the other end of the same road, a further roundabout was built at the location of the crossroads with City Road.





主体段3：车站

In 2007, the hospital was served by six bus stops on Hospital Road, with three on each side. By 2010, these stops had disappeared and had been replaced by a bus station to the west of Hospital Road, with access to both roundabouts mentioned above.





主体段4：停车场

In 2007, there was only one car park, which stretched the full length of the east side of Hospital Road, with a single access point in the south-east of the ring road. By 2010, this had become a car park for staff only and a further car park for public use only had been constructed, to the right of the eastern section of the ring road.

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