小学英文：Hug in spring_800字

Springisaverygoodseason.It'sthefirstoftheyear.Springisbeautiful。Thereisachinesesaying：ayear'splanisspring，adayoftheplaninthemorning.Weshouldsavemoretimetostudymorehard.Buttotellthetruth,theweatherofspringisn'tverygood.Theweathersometimeslikesummerandsometimeslikewinter.Inthemorning,it'svery,verycold.Atnoon,it'stoomuchhot.Butitdoesn'tmatter,Istilllikespring.Springisaseasonforchildren.Theflowerarecoulorfulandthegrassisgreen.Plantsareeverywhere:field,thecornerofwalls,parks......Bees,butterflysandotherinsectsaredancing.Everythingisgrowing.Inspring,childrenlikeplaying:flyingkite,playingfootball,ridingabicycle......Theyhuginspring.AndIhavesomeactivitiestoo,Ialsohuginspring.

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Springisaverygoodseason.It'sthefirstseasonoftheyear.Springisbeautiful.ThereisaChinesesaying:Makeyourwholeyear'splaninthespringandthewholeday'splaninthemorning.Weshouldsavemoretimetostudyhard.Buttotellthetruth,theweatherinspringisn'tverygood.Theweatherissometimeslikesummerandsometimeslikewinter.Inthemorning,it'sverycold.Atnoon,it'smuchhotter.Butitdoesn'tmatter,Istilllikespring.Springisaseasonforchildren.Theflowersarecolorfulandthegrassisgreen.Plantsareeverywhere.Youcanseebees,butterfliesandotherinsectsdancing.Everythingisgrowing.Inspring,childrencanflykites,playfootball,andridebicycles.AndIcandosomeactivitiestoo.Let’swelcomespringbyawarmhug.

修改老师：Crystal老师

六年级:小学生2010

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