小学英文：INSIDE OF YOU_2000字

IhavemanyreportsthatIneedtotellyouguys,anditisaboutlove.Iknowthatsomeofyouhatethiswordandthinkthatitwassomeofmymeantricksagain,butIjustwanttotellyouthatthiswasnojoke,becauseIhadputmyheartonthisreport.

Itwasthesummer,andIwasjustdoingmyhomeworkasusualholidays;Iwasactuallyhavingaverygoodtimeandwhatwasbeingtoldofme,andIwentdownstairstogetasnack.WhenIsawthiscoolgirlnamedMarinette,shewascool;andIjustwantedtotalktoher.Ididn’tactuallyhaveacrushonher;Ijustreallylikedthewaythatshelooks.Ijustwentoutsideandstoppedtosay,“Hi,”shesaidHIback,andIwasactuallyastonishedtoseeherquitesurprised;shelookedlikeshehadaverygoodsurprisethatshewashavingat.Ilookedallthewaythroughthisandsawnosuchthing;Ishookmyhead,andwentinside.

AfterIhadfinishedlunchIwentdownstairstgetmybagandgetreadyforschool.WhenIgotintomyseat,IstartedtothinkthatsomethingstrangeisupwithMarinette;itwasactuallynotquiteastonishingtohearthis;butitwasactuallywhatIwashopingfor,Istartedtojumpup,andrushingtothebathroom.Iscoldedsomepeopleontheway,andPladcameoutofmypocket,youknowtheflyingcat:What’syourproblem;maybeyouhaveacrushonher;“No,ofcoursenot.”

Iblushed,andwaswaitingtotransformtofigurewhatwasup.Ifiguredthatsomepeopledidn’twantsomebodyrummagingaroundsomebody,andsoItransformedback,andwenttoclass.

Isatonmyseatquietlyuntiltheschoolbellranglikethesignalthatitwastimetogohome.Istartedtohavealowvoice,andIactuallyevenbegantolearnswimming.Itwasverystrangethatsomebodycouldlearnthat,butmanypeopledohavethatkindofhabit.

Istartedrummagingaroundmyroom,andfoundsomecooldiariesfromsolongago;Icheckedonthemandwenttobed,andthoughtallaboutloveforthenextfewhoursuntilIfellasleep.Itwaskindofcool,butIpreferitthatwaysinceIdidn’tevenknowthatitwastimetobereflectedbyyourpersonalself.

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IhavemanyreportsthatIneedtotellyouguys,andtheyareaboutlove.Iknowthatsomeofyouhatethiswordandthinkthatitwassomeofmymeantricksagain,butIjustwanttotellyouthatthiswasnojoke,becauseIhadputmyheartonthisreport.

Itwasasummer,andIwasjustdoingmyhomeworkasusualholidays;Iwasactuallyhavingaverygoodtimeandwhatwasbeingtoldofme,andIwentdownstairstogetasnack.WhenIsawthiscoolgirlnamedMarinette,shewascool;andIjustwantedtotalktoher.Ididn’tactuallyhaveacrushonher;Ijustreallylikedthewaythatshelooks.Ijustwentoutsideandstoppedtosay,“Hi,”shesaidHIback,andIwasactuallyastonishedtoseeherquitesurprised;shelookedlikeshehadaverygoodsurprisethatshewashavingat.Ilookedallthewaythroughthisandsawnosuchthing;Ishookmyhead,andwentinside.

AfterIhadfinishedlunchIwentdownstairstogetmybagandgetreadyforschool.WhenIgotintomyseat,IstartedtothinkthatsomethingstrangeisupwithMarinette;itwasactuallynotquiteastonishingtohearthis;butitwasactuallywhatIwashopingfor,Istartedtojumpup,andrushingtothebathroom.Iscoldedsomepeopleontheway,andPladcameoutofmypocket,youknowtheflyingcat:What’syourproblem;maybeyouhaveacrushonher;“No,ofcoursenot.”

Iblushed,andwaswaitingtotransformtofigurewhatwasup.Ifiguredthatsomepeopledidn’twantsomebodyrummagingaroundsomebody,andsoItransformedback,andwenttoclass.

Isatonmyseatquietlyuntiltheschoolbellranglikethesignalthatitwastimetogohome.Istartedtohavealowvoice,andIactuallyevenbegantolearnswimming.Itwasverystrangethatsomebodycouldlearnthat,butmanypeopledohavethatkindofhabit.

Istartedrummagingaroundmyroom,andfoundsomecooldiariesfromsolongago;Icheckedonthemandwenttobed,andthoughtallaboutloveforthenextfewhoursuntilIfellasleep.Itwaskindofcool,butIpreferitthatwaysinceIdidn’tevenknowthatitwastimetobereflectedbyyou.

四年级:欧阳雨鹭

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