小学英文：Four season_600字

Ilikespringbest.Becausetherearebeautifulflowerseverwhere.It'spretty.Icanlookflowers.Ioftenplayinthespring.SometimesIcanplaybasketball.Ilikesummerbest.BecauseIcangoswimming.It'shot.Ioftengoswimmingwithmyfamily.Ilikeeaticecreaminsummer.Ilikeautumnbest.BeacuseIcanpickapple,butIcan'tswim.Ioftengoonapicnicwithmyfamily.SometimesIwatchTVonhome.Ilikewinterbest.BecauseIcanplayinthesnow.Winteriswhiteandpretty.Mymamandsisteralsolikewinter.Ioftenplayinthesnowinwinter.SometimesIgoshoppingwithmyfamily.

修改后：

Ilikespring.Becauseinspring,therearebeautifulflowerseverwhere.Icanseeflowers.Icangoouttoplayinspring.SometimesIplaybasketball.Ilikesummer.BecauseIcangoswimming.It'shotinsummer,soIoftengoswimmingwithmyfamily.AndIlikeeatingicecreamtoo.Ilikeautumn.BeacuseIcanpickapples.Ioftengoforapicnicwithmyfamily.SometimesIwatchTVathome.Ilikewinter.BecauseIcanmakeasnowmanandhaveasnowballfightwithmyfriends.

修改老师：Crystal老师

五年级:袁泉

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