小学英文:A SPECIAL FACT_2000字

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Ofcourseinthewholewildworld,thereisonlyoneplacewithwhichisthecoldest;andthatisinAntarctica.

Itwasabeautifulfactthatonceortwiceayear,therewasgoingtobeabigparade;nownobodyeverheardofthatstory;butletmetellyouallaboutit,onetheNorthpoleuntilallthewaytoitsopposite.

Afteradayortwo,themagnificentmagicianofthegreatLondon,isreadytotravelforitsreward,ofsavinghetownfromadangerousearthquake.Afterthat,hehelpedthepoorpeoplerecoverandsavedalotoftownspeoplethatweresufferingforlife.

Whenhewasfullypackedtogoandtravel,hedoublecheckedeverythinghadhewasgoingtouseorshouldIsayneed.Thenhewenttotheairportreadytotakeofftheyalwaysmadesuresafetyfirst.Whenitwasready,themanagercounted,“One,twothree,getset;go!”andthentheplanetookoff.Itflewagooddistance,untilitreachedthebeach.Therethemanenjoyedhislife,butwasnotquiteastonishedabit.

Whenhewassickofthatplace,hedecidedtochangeanotherplacetoenjoyhislife.Andsoonhehoppedontotheplan.Whenittookoff,themanwaswonderingwhatplacearetheyarrivingnow?Whenheopenedhiseyes,hefoundhimselfintheNorthPole.Thereherestedandenjoyedhislife.Whenitwastimetogoandfindanotherplace,hedecidedtogotoitsopposite;Antarctica.Hewassovery,very,veryexcited.

Theplanetookoffagain,anditflewawhileuntiltheyreachedAntarctica;itwasquitealongtrip,butwhentheyfinallylandedonland,themanassoexcitedthatheswitchedonhisclothesimmediatelyandwenttoplay.

Hewashavingaverygoodtime;atlasthechosehisplace.

Hewenttothemanageroftheairport,andsaidthathecouldnowrest;becausehehadfinishedhisworkinfindinghisplaceoflife.

Hewasveryglad,andwhenhewasreadytobuildhishome,hethoughtaboutthepenguins.Hehadplayedwiththemagoodtime;atlasthefinishedbuildinghishouse.Hehadmadefriendswiththepenguinstoo.

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Ofcourseinthewholewildworld,thereisonlyoneplacewhichisthecoldest;andthatisinAntarctica.

Itwasabeautifulfactthatonceortwiceayear,therewasgoingtobeabigparade;nownobodyhaseverheardofthatstory;butletmetellyouallaboutit.

Afteradayortwo,themagnificentmagicianofthegreatLondonwasreadytotravelforitsrewardofsavingthetownfromadangerousearthquake.Afterthat,hehelpedthepoorpeoplerecoverandsavedalotoftownspeoplethatweresufferingforlife.

Whenhewassickofthatplace,hedecidedtochangeanotherplacetoenjoyhislife,sohetookaplane.Whenheopenedhiseyes,hefoundhimselfintheNorthPole.Thereherestedandenjoyedhislife.Whenitwastimetogoandfindanotherplace,hedecidedtogotoitsopposite;Antarctica.Hewasvery,very,veryexcited.

Theplanetookoffagain.Itwasquitealongtrip,butwhentheyfinallylandedonland,themanwassoexcitedthatheswitchedonhisclothesimmediatelyandwenttoplay.

Hewashavingaverygoodtime;atlasthechosehisplace.

Hewenttothemanageroftheairport,andsaidthathecouldrestbecausehehadfinishedhisworkinfindinghisplaceoflife.

Hewasveryglad,andwhenhewasreadytobuildhishome,hethoughtaboutthepenguins.Hehadhadagoodtimewiththem.Atlasthefinishedbuildinghishouse.Hehadmadefriendswiththepenguinstoo.

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