小学英文：Hug in spring_2000字

Hughugspringspringspring,acommonname,buttheworldistoloveher...Thehotspring,no,nothebitterwinter.

Spring,alwaysgiveapersonakindofwarmth,agentleness.Makethepersoncan'thelpfallinlovewithher.Wokeupinthespringofagroupofgrass.Yousee,thegreengrass,likeagroupoflivelyandlovelychildren,naughtygroundtogetfromthemother'sarmsstretchouttothelittlehead.Theyarenotafraidofwarmweather,tomeetthewarmspring.Joyofdancing;Spring,thegentlysinging,cametothebrookdrewmanysmallinsects,thosenaughtychildrenalsoinvoluntarilylooklively.They,andspring,playedsongsoflifetogether...Spring,itisthesmileoftheearth,thespring,isthesmellofgrass,istoletthechildrenhappyparadise;Spring,isthegoddessofnature.Thecolorfulpaintsontheearth,rubtheskyisclearblue.Letthe7colouroflightreturntotheirhomes.

Springiscolorful.Thewindofspringisgreen,greenblowingacrossthefields,wheatseedlingsturngreen;Greenblowacrossthestream,clearwater,green;Blowsoverthehills,greentreesbudspit.Actually,ah,springisagreatpainter,shedrewaclearbrook,greenmountains,moistsoil.Thescentofthesoil,butalsoamagic!Hey,thespringisalsoagreatmusician.Shewillrestinthelargeforest,changedthelark,cuckoo,aswellasothersinger'slargeensemble.Someonesaid,springisamagician,becameamiracleintheworld.

Thegardenersaid,springisfairyflowers,treesandflowershasturnedoutverybeautifulflowers;Theteachersaid,springisafarmer,sowtheseedsoflove;Thechildrensaid,springisoneofnature'seditors,gaveusaamusementpark.Isaid,springisguidingangel,leadustowardthecorrectpath;Momanddadsaid,springisaguardianangel,accompanyushealthygrowth...Ah!Springah,bringyouapieceofvibrant,youmakeallthelifeallthingsrecovery,theawakenofspringisabundant.Ah!Springah,thankyouforyourgift!Wouldyoupleasegetthekidstoembraceyou!Together,letusembracespringtoo

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Springislikeawarmandgentleperson.Peoplealwayscan'thelpfallinginlovewithher.Inspring,wecanseethegreengrass,likeagroupoflivelyandlovelychildrenwhorunandplayaround.Theyarenotafraidofwarmweather,andtheywanttowelcomethewarmspring.Theysing,dance,andplaytogether.Springisthesmileoftheearth,thesmellofthegrass,thehappyparadiseofthechildrenandthegoddessofthenature.

Springiscolorful.Thewindofspringisgreen.Greenblowacrossthefields,wheatseedlingsturngreen.Greenblowacrossthestream,clearwaterturnsgreen.Greenblowoverthehills,greentreesbudspit.Actually,springisagreatpainter.Shedrawsaclearbrook,greenmountainsandmoistsoil.Springisagreatmusician.Sherestsinthelargeforest,changesthelark,cuckoo,aswellasothersinger'sensemble.Springisamagician.Shemakesamiracleintheworld.

Thegardenersaysspringisfairyflowerswhichturnstreesandflowersmorebeautiful.Theteachersaysspringisafarmerwhosowstheseedsoflove.Thechildrensay,springisoneofthenature'seditorswhogivesusanamusementpark.Momanddadsayspringisaguardianangelwhoaccompaniesushealthygrowth.Isayspringisguidingangelwholeadsustowardtherightpath.Springbringsusvibrantandmakesallthelivescomebacktolife.Iwanttothankspringforhergift!Letusembracespring!

修改老师：Crystal老师

六年级:孙圣博

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