小学六年级英语作文

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小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She

’

s very pretty. She is tall and thin.

She

has

two

big

eyes

and

a

small

mouth.

Her

hair

is

long.

She

likes

cats

very

much.

And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play

games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直

接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、

上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词

[

组

]

，以免写出一些错句子。写作

时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

I

’

m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o

’

clock every day. I have

breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o

’

clock. I have classes

from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class

on Tuesday. I don

’

t have to go to school on weekend, and I like going swimming

on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历

写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，

写自己身边熟悉的事情。

I can help do housework

I

am

a

girl.

My

name

is

Li

Ling.

I

’

m

in

Class

Three,

Grade

Five.

I

’

m

very

helpful

at

home.

I

can

water

the

flowers,

empty

the

trash

and

sweep

the

floor.

After

meals,

I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about

you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，

介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，

因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

My Village

My

village

is

very

beautiful.

There

are

many

houses

in

the

village.

Near

the

village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water

in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can

see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village.

Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

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