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第一篇:《高中英语短文改错,附答案》

I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.

改错二

I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.

改错三

Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?

改错四

Dear Bob,

Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.

First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.

Yours, Li Hua

Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.

改错六

Dear Li Ming,

I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.

改错七

Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happy if you can be friend. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their life when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.

改错八

One afternoon Jack is walking down a river along. It was very cold day and on the river few boats could be seen．When he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene. A boy fell of a canoe(独木舟) and was struggling in the water．Without think about herself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy． He was about to drag（拖） the boy to the river bank then he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge． One of them stared Jack and said angrily, “They are making a film and you’ve spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”

答案：

改错一：who's 改为whose 2.正确 3.去掉but 4.on改为in 5.parents后加were 6.homeworks改为homework 7.stopped后加to 8.find改为found 9.immediate改为immediately 10.fire前加the

改错二： the改为a 2.正确 3.see前加to 4.go改为going 5.去掉been 6.

去掉had 7.去掉but

8.去掉had 9.on改为at 10.him改为her

改错三：1.getting 后加on或along 2.fallen改为been 3.shy前加a 4.feeling改为feelings 当情感讲时feeling常用单数 5.study前加to或study改为studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 8.watched改为watch 9正确 10.and改为or

改错四：1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。 2. to 后加 be 或 become。 3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。 4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作形容儿童的词语主语， 故用 which。 5. 此行无错。 6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”， 修饰可数名词复数。 7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知， 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。 8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in„为固定短语， “对„„感兴趣”。 9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。 10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。iamlihua短文改错。

改错五：答案：

76．去掉to 短语错误。go abroad“出国”。

77．present→presents 名词的数错误。present“礼物”，是可数名词。

78．去掉第二个were 动词错误。interest在此是及物动词用法，意为“使„„感兴趣”。be interested in“对„„感兴趣”。

79．buys→bought 时态错误。由全文可知，用一般过去时态。

80．√

81．them→it 代词错误。在这本书里有关于肢体语言的图片和不同国家的语言习俗。用it指代这本书。

82．put前加been 语态错误。我的礼物被放在了你的卧室里了。礼物是被放在卧室里，所以用被动语态。

83．that→which 定语从句关系词错误。介词后用which，不用that。

84．but→and 连接逻辑错误。前后是并列关系而非转折关系。

85．few→little 混淆错误。a little 与 little 可以用作副词， 表示“有点”“稍稍” ，修饰动词、副词、形容词或介词短语。如：He is a little tired.他有点累了。而a few不可用作副词。

改错五 1.have去掉 2.about后的you改为me 3.works→work 4.learn→learning

5.recent→recently 6.interesting→interest 7.English后的and改为but 8.be后加an

9.at→in 10.where后加there

改错六41. about→with/to 根据句意，可知此处是表达“和父母交谈”，而不是“谈论父母”。

42. as→even if 意为“好像”，与句意不符；根据句意，此处应是表达让步关系。故用even if ,意为“即使”。

43. going→getting get along well with 是固定短语，意为“和…相片融洽”。

44. √

45. way→ways some在此处修饰可数名词复数。

46. walk前加a go out for a walk意为“出去散步”

47. and→or 此处表选择关系。

48. are→were “他们年轻时候”应用动词的过去式。

49. our→their 和they保持一致。

50. honesty→honest 形容词honest 作表语。

第二篇:《2014浙江高考英语短文改错20篇短文改错(学生版)》

01

Manager,

I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some pr奶奶的手oblem in the cinema.iamlihua短文改错。

First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.iamlihua短文改错。

As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make more improvements.

02

This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old Yours faithfully, Li Hua man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

03

Years of school life has taught me a lot of thing, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didn't realize its importance until I was chosen the monitor of my class in my senior middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself when other students cared little about class activities. As result, I was tired out and depressing. Then I turned to his teacher and he advised me to cooperate to others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and had everyone do their part in class. It is working in teams instead of on my own who has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficiently.

04

The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.

05 I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing

for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.

06

Dear Jim,

I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-metre race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. We can’t speak too high of him. To my great joy, my class was rewarded first prize. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.

Looking forward to receiving your letter.

Yours,

Li Ping

07

As a teenager, I remember Dad get home lately every night. He already had a great work and loved by his students. He took years to finish that he wanted. And now, decades later, I see myself for him. I go to work throughout the week and then came the weekend. I go to class for six hours on Sunday so I can finish my degree that I started twenty years ago. It took me the long time to figure out that what I wanted. I want to do for student what my father did for students. In my opinion, my father is my real hero.

08

College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in

and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As for me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship. 09

I went to a shop to buy a jacket one Sunday. It is famous one where there are a variety of clothes. I looked all around and finally find an attractive jacket. When I was asked the price, the assistant said, "Seventy dollars." He added that if I paid by cash, he would give me a discount – ten percent off the fixing price. I thought it was so expensive and started to leave. As I was left, he grabbed me and said, "Okay. Forty-five dollars." Delighting, I bought the jacket. However, when I got home and tried on my new jacket, I realized that anything was wrong with it. It had a pocket where wouldn't open. I was speechless and looked at it in amazement.

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10

I am very much glad to receive a letter from you. You know, in China we call people born between 1990 and 1999 the post – 90s. I am a boy belong to this group. For our generation, life is getting more difficult than for the old generation. The job market is tough. The house is too expensive to afford. Now many girls would like marry a man who own a house and a car. I don’t think love built on houses and cars was true love. And this is the social reality that they have to face. Because situations are tough today, we post – 90s are making great effort to live a good life. We think we will make life better and better in the future.

11 In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when Tom, a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university.

12

Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the members of a family, no matter where far away they are, will try to get together in that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October 1621. In 1620, the group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts .They were looking for a freely place to live in as they chose. So they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved death. The next spring, they began farming. With the help of local Indians, they learned to be plant corn and raise animals. In the fall, the fields produced a good harvest. Filling with joy and thanks to God, they held a celebration. In 1863, it became a national holiday.

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Three years ago, I became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient but considerate．Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class．I decided to make the best use for it. I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates．Whenever I had difficulties, they were always helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence

第三篇:《最新2013年高考英语短文改错专题训练及解析》

最新2013年高考英语短文改错专题训练

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(1)iamlihua短文改错。

My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my parent went to work in the fields taking my little sister with Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to the r关于毕业的作文iver nearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped to the water immediate. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.

(2)

May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement make.

The Student Union is going to hold a party in Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome my friends from the United States. The party will be hold in the roof garden of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 p.m. There will have music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gift. Everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose. Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wish.

Don’t forget: 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There is sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcomed.

(3)

Dear Peter,

We're so glad you're coming to join us on Sunday. Here is what you can find us. We'll have our picnics in the People's Park. You know where that is, isn't you? After you entered the park by the main gate, walk straightly on till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turning right. After walking in a while you'll come to a hill. Walk around to other side of the hill. There you'll see a lake. We'll have our picnic here in the small

wood by the lake. I'm sure you'll have no trouble finding us. Do come!

Yours

(4)

A few days before my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me seating on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroad, a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. ‘We've found you long last,’ they said. And we don't know them. Point to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, ‘He stopped us about half hour ago and made us to catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hoping you don't have to wait as long as we did . Good luck.’ May 3rd, Sunday fine

(5)

Dear Mr Smith,

I was so please to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my school. You are right, quite few changes have been taken place. On the one side of the road, there has a new classroom building. On the other side which a playground used to be now stand another new building, our library. In it there are all kind of books, newspapers or magazines. The playground is now in front of school. We've also plant a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself some days.

Best wishes!

Yours,

(6)

Li Hua My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province on February 1977. I started school in 1984 while I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduate this summer. The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemical and computer. I like English and computer best but I am very good at them.

Last year I had won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collect stamps. My favourite sport are swimming in summer and skating in winter.

(7)

Dear Dick,

How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in china. In short, things have begun to improve since we called on school to reduce learning load. I don’t know ab

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